Would you want to check out this book at the library?

Id like to be an author or at least get a book published sometime in my life.. so yeah I think I could bc I have a pretty good imagination(this book is like "normal" compared to my other ideas) and my aunt is a published author for romance novels lol sooo plz let me know if u would check out this book from reading this portion of it if it was on the back.. I have a basic plot line..I've been going back and forth a lot on the main climax /conflict. Btw I'm 16 and not very good with grammar (I have always gotten a's in english but ..still I'm pretty bad) so plz let me know of things that are wrong and like I said before I'm 16 sooo plz be nice and don't crush my dreams :P thanks ...so here goes . "Change is good, it helps you find yourself." To Jasmine he sounded like a recording from his memory, something he had heard a thousand times before but didn’t believe. She studied his face in the moonlight searching for that memory. As if she could find an explanation, she let her eyes wander over every shadow and every angle, searching for something but finding nothing. Nothing apart from what seemed to be his usual boredom and mental fatigue. He turned to look at her then, the moonlight and shadows trading places on his face, and she met his glance. His eyes were a vibrant blue even with his black hair masking them in shadow In contrast to the rest of his features, his eyes couldn’t keep anything from her. They told her too much and all at once, things like sorrow, danger, fear, and love. Immensely confused and slightly shocked, Jasmine retrieved her gaze to see his shifted grin. Alec watched her stare at him. He liked the way she bit her bottom lip when she was concentrating and he liked the fact that she was concentrating on him even more. She was trying to figure him out, the obvious curiosity on her face proved as much. His heart began to pound when he decided that he would let her. “Did it help you find yourself?” “No,” Alec rubbed the back of his neck. “But that’s probably because there was nothing to find.” okay so alec blue eys black hair tall misundertood tortured artist who has trust issues bc his brother left him and his mom when he was young to join the military..and his parents are divorced bc his dad was abusive but now he has a step dad and a young step brother and a pretty good life but yeah people don't know his past..and he might be a werewolf (I'm afraid to fall into the twilight trap). But regardless, he has a pack of friends who are all "bad".. then jasmine (dirty blonde hair short..bluish green eyes) is the girl who just switched to alec's school from a catholic school and she has no clue of who she is anymore but they are complete ooposites hence the name of the book will be Contrast..cuz they have an art class together and that's how they meet. Yep :) oh and this is copyrighted :P characters are 17.